Black Ace
Hey. My name is Lyneku, but for short, you can call me Neku.
Black Ace
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Programmers and Pixel Artist's NEEDED!
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(I'm a horrible pixel artist. Preferrebally Breeze or something like LaTale or MapleStory character *Not chibi, would like them to be taller.*)
Black Ace is about a boy named Kairu who joins an association named Chrome, the creators of the O5(The world's core). He soon dies after he finds out that he was killed before by the mysterious Nebula. Now it's up to you, members of Chrome, to maintain the O5.
Year: 2011
Location: Xendia
-My role in the project is Lead Programmer.
-No this is not a paid job. Maybe from donations. Yeah.
-The benefits one gets for helping me out is... being known more?
-So far I've made some GUI, trying to work on character design on paper first. ( Pixel Artist anyone?)
being a helper on a game doesn't really get you more known.
here is the benefit for working on his\her game:
-Something you can throw in a portfolio.
-Experience.
here is the benefit for working on his\her game:
-Something you can throw in a portfolio.
-Experience.
Depends if the game gets really popular.
A few questions :
- You said, "He soon dies after he finds out that he was killed before..."
So he dies, after he found out that he already died before?.
- Why is Kairu so important? He seems like a normal boy who just happened to join Chrome, so why is the story about him? "Black ace is about a boy named Kairu...".
- Who or what is Nebula?
- Why is it called Black Ace?
- We have to protect the 05 from...?
Do you have any screenshots or a more detailed story?
Or a story from a different main character's point of view?
Aslong as it answers my questions >_>.
Is this some kind of programming game? Or is it just built around that idea? (you mentioned "maintaining the OS")
I think Yichigo has some good points, some characters/details need to be further defined/explained.
@Shinsetsu I'm not working for anyone. I guess I wasn't clear enough. I'm the Project Developer.
@Omnio I didn't mean OS as in Operation System. Sorry if I confused you, but it was a 5.
@Yichigo I guess I wasn't ready enough. I'll work on the storyline more.
Thanks for the feedback.
@Lyneku you were being clear. You just misread my post I was responding to this
-The benefits one gets for helping me out is... being known more?
if your game gets big it might make some people more known. however if it doesn't then that really isn't a benefit for helping you now is it?
The idea seems very vague, which won't attract many developers. And to be honest the presentation wasn't very appealing. My advice is to put together a more solid presentation of the game and your goal as a team, your goals for the project, and what you're looking for in terms of developers.
You should provide more information. Some examples:
- What is your role in the project?
- Is this a paid job?
- What benefits does one get by helping you out?
- What's been done so far?
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